A Fog

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Well, we've all seen fog pile up on a cold winter morning. Fog is quite an inspiration for poets, it sure became an inspiration for me when I went to Nainital in Uttarakhand and watched as the fog slowly covered everything in sight. Hope you like this poem!
ENJOY...
A  Fog 
A fog blocks my line of sight.
A fog thick and white.
A fog that blankets the valley below.
A fog that lays down low.
A fog so misty and grey.
A fog that blocks the sun's every ray
A fog that threads through the mountains
A fog that forever remains.
A fog no one can walk through.
A fog that separates me and you.
A fog at dusk and dawn.
A fog that the world has drawn.
Your guide,
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Comments

Anonymous said…
It's a sadistic poem expressing anger and the feeling inside one mind,right?? Ig
8:54 pm, October 29, 2023
@opinionated9 said…
Sadistic wouldn't be the right word, sadistic technically mean gaining pleasure by inflicting pain upon others, but if you meant it in a way like 'a sad poem' then yes you could say so. Thankyou for digging in so deep into the poem, I myself didn't think of its deeper meaning when I wrote it.
9:42 pm, November 26, 2023
Anonymous said…
That's...deep, just deep
11:04 pm, December 05, 2023

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