Years of Progress..... Rose, five year back and now

This is the poem 'Rose' which I wrote in 2018. It was the first poem, moreover, the first piece of writing I ever wrote. I fondly remember writing it and reading it to my parents. It was also the first work I posted. Also, my writing has improved greatly over the five years I've been writing.

ENJOY...

Rose🌹

A rose is soft

it lays up a loft

a rose brings joy 

to a girl and a boy

a rose is delicate

but sure to fascinate

In Brazil or France

France the city of love

a rose is not to be shoved

a rose brings happiness

to the kind and the careless

Just a rose

a little rose


And now for the one I recently wrote called 'Rose 2.0'

Rose 2.0

The rose is sugary red

the prettiest of the flower bed

A blooming rose starts spring

Love and affection along it brings

A rose blooms connections

A rose is love's reflection

Anywhere you go

A rose will show

The symbol of love

Free as a dove

A rose keeps you restless

Whether kind or careless

The flower of blooming affection

A flower made with perfection

Go ahead, give a rose to your love

And leave the rest to the ones above

Your guide,

13 Chapters

Comments

Anonymous said…
Wow 🤩 your writing has really grown a lot, but the style is still the same and I love that. Best wishes for your future 😊
Anonymous said…
Wow